2007-05-15

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2007-05-15 05:00 pm

Revised version of "Her Seventeenth Birthday"

FA sent back "Her Seventeenth Birthday" because of their usual fiddly obsession with commas and such, but it gave me an opportunity to rewrite it. I was dissatisfied with what I had done, and felt that it was little more than a skeleton of an idea. This may represent an improvement - I hope.

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