ext_50177 ([identity profile] fpb.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] fpb 2004-10-16 02:29 am (UTC)

What is really excellent about this (although it is a bit long for a drabble) is that there is motion in it. Not only a complexity of emotions, but also an ongoing revelation of character and situation. I am very impressed.
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