This implies that if they were younger, they could be left in empty houses alone Ouch! Damn right. Of course I should have said the opposite. Shall be corrected.
"Truth hurts" is how I heard English children. Actually, as I have to write this in my mind both in Italian and in English, "the truth hurts" would be a bit easier, because Italian would always use the article.
you built up the scenery and the environment better, and have described a few more characters. Thank you, I meant to. As I said a couple of stories ago, this series is meant to reach outwards with the growth of the child and his perceptions. I may want to go back and write a short story about Ricky and his siblings early on, if I get a decent idea, because that is the kind of family background that comes before anything else and that I haven't done as well as I might have.
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Ouch! Damn right. Of course I should have said the opposite. Shall be corrected.
"Truth hurts" is how I heard English children. Actually, as I have to write this in my mind both in Italian and in English, "the truth hurts" would be a bit easier, because Italian would always use the article.
you built up the scenery and the environment better, and have described a few more characters.
Thank you, I meant to. As I said a couple of stories ago, this series is meant to reach outwards with the growth of the child and his perceptions. I may want to go back and write a short story about Ricky and his siblings early on, if I get a decent idea, because that is the kind of family background that comes before anything else and that I haven't done as well as I might have.