I'm reading the post... and all I'm seeing is that you were Niffled!
Congratulations! (Also, I want to thank you for spelling existence right, as I have seen it spelled with an "a" at least three times today and that hurts my brain.)
After rereading, I find that your writing has so much vividity and imagery. I'm distracted from what you're actually saying. I don't know. Your smooth and slippery writing makes it hard for me to take what you're saying seriously, though I know you are very serious.
I guess I am both praising your fluidity of writing and reprimanding (if I may) your harsh and perhaps unnecessary words. It's terrible for them to attack an uninvolved bystanding Niffler, yes. But as I understand it, you've said things like this time and again. What will more of the same accomplish?
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Congratulations! (Also, I want to thank you for spelling existence right, as I have seen it spelled with an "a" at least three times today and that hurts my brain.)
After rereading, I find that your writing has so much vividity and imagery. I'm distracted from what you're actually saying. I don't know. Your smooth and slippery writing makes it hard for me to take what you're saying seriously, though I know you are very serious.
I guess I am both praising your fluidity of writing and reprimanding (if I may) your harsh and perhaps unnecessary words. It's terrible for them to attack an uninvolved bystanding Niffler, yes. But as I understand it, you've said things like this time and again. What will more of the same accomplish?