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I am making a list of Things I Was Right About. Of course, the list of things I was wrong about is much longer, but this one is more fun to do. I regret you will have to take my word for it, because some of these are from WIPs.

1) The climax is a great battle in which Hogwarts is besieged. I have written this one over and over again.
2) Bellatrix gets what's coming to her at the hands of a mother defending her children (only in my case it was a Muggle)
3) Snape had loved Lily all his life, and his love and grief gave him the strength to resist Voldemort's mind probes (but nearly all of us had come to that conclusion by the end)
4) Sacrificial death (only I had Aberforth do it in Dumbledore's place, because of a third prophecy demanding the death of "Dumbledore", unspecified);
5) one of the Creeveys dies in battle;
6) Harry and the Trio survive;
7) Neville develops into a great warrior (the signs were there since OotP);
8) Luna survives, and by the time the victory is celebrated, she is still alone and there are no clear ships for her;
9) In the middle of the battle, Hogwarts is helped by a host of volunteer wizards come from outside and led by a Slytherin (Slughorn in this case, Zabini in mine);
10) The Malfoys somehow wiggle through all the disasters and treacheries and manage to survive more or less intact, if perhaps humiliated;
11) Narcissa at least has clearly had enough of the Dark Lord before the end.

More as I think of them.

Date: 2007-07-23 05:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com
I was thinking of you the whole time, as we were reading. At some points, it was really like reading your fanfic. You had absolutely great insight!

Date: 2007-07-23 05:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fpb.livejournal.com
If I was one tenth as good as JKR is, I would thank the Lord for making me better than I am. (Isn't that an Irishism?) The tremendous, unrelenting narrative tension, the brilliant changes of pace, the symphonic weaving of themes and reminiscences... what a wonderful, wonderful piece of writing.

Date: 2007-07-23 05:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com
It was super--I loved it. Was completely satisfied, and many bits had me in tears.

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