er... drabbles?

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I don't have as many friends as Kikei or Bruno or Kenna Hijja, but some of those I do are among the best writers around. So, can you have a go at a drabble for me?

The wind was whipping the waters of the firth into a rage.

Harry looked at her and found himself thinking.

You are not going to believe this.

A rose can sometimes be a hideous thing.

Dung did not regard himself as a sentimental man.

Melting like wax in a flame...

Comments

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What is really excellent about this (although it is a bit long for a drabble) is that there is motion in it. Not only a complexity of emotions, but also an ongoing revelation of character and situation. I am very impressed.