Shoebox project is a really good MWPP story. Worth the time to read, even though you don't like all the ships. A lovely mix of prose and artwork. <ljuser-http://www.livejournal.com/community/shoebox_project/>
I'm not so keen on Harry here (his lower features seem a bit close compared to the upper half of his face, and purely subjectively I guess I don't picture him with that facial shape) but Narcissa is excellent - especially her expression.
You may have a point. I suspect that there is an error in perspective somewhere in Harry's face - look at his nose as comapred with the side of his jaw. I think myself that Narcissa looks too young, but I tried to go with JKR's description of her "looking like a drowned person" at Spinner's End, which suggests lank rather than curly hair, and to give a suggestion of the desperation she still must be feeling under the disguise of Malfoy arrogance.
She didn't strike me that way, but I see where you're coming from. Still, I'm sure she can make herself as young as she wants to look, and if she's anywhere near as vain as her Muggle counterparts... ;)
If I had drawn Harry's scar in the centre, it would barely have been visible. Anyway, you can see the top only - it goes across.
I used my own hands to model, making sure that I narrowed my sausage-like fingers to look more like Narcissa's long and elegant ones.
As for the wands, the position was dictated by the composition. If I had had them holding by the ends instead of in the middle, the wands would have been either ridiculously short or poking each other's eyes out.
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She didn't strike me that way, but I see where you're coming from. Still, I'm sure she can make herself as young as she wants to look, and if she's anywhere near as vain as her Muggle counterparts... ;)
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For shame, Fabio.
Harry's scar is in the middle of his forehead, not the side! It is it is it is.
I marvel at the hands. They always give me so much trouble and yours here look great! I also like how they're holding the wands too.
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I used my own hands to model, making sure that I narrowed my sausage-like fingers to look more like Narcissa's long and elegant ones.
As for the wands, the position was dictated by the composition. If I had had them holding by the ends instead of in the middle, the wands would have been either ridiculously short or poking each other's eyes out.