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fpb ([personal profile] fpb) wrote2005-09-08 10:05 am
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"... but Hermione got there first..."

This is my first attempt at a subject that has held my visual imagination ever since I read it in PoA. There are a number of problems, especially in the matter of dress, but I was limited by the paper size. I think I will try this subject again, but I think the basic idea is good.
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[identity profile] dreamer-marie.livejournal.com 2005-09-08 10:24 am (UTC)(link)
It's really good. You got the feeling very well. I get angry at Malfoy just by looking at it :-)

[identity profile] tashmania.livejournal.com 2005-09-08 10:52 am (UTC)(link)
I like it :) It's an interesting perspective to draw it from but I think that only adds to it.

[identity profile] super-pan.livejournal.com 2005-09-08 12:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Hermione's wand is spitting fire! Your Ron is awesome!

[identity profile] fpb.livejournal.com 2005-09-08 12:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Welll... Ron is rather too short. He is meant to be this thin, long and lanky kid, which does not come across at all here, and which I will have to straighten out next time I tackle this picture.

I learned to draw by drawing superhero comics. Does it show? 8-)

[identity profile] super-pan.livejournal.com 2005-09-08 12:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I just really like his face, and that he looks like a redhead somehow, even though it's a charcoal picture. And he and Harry look so scandalized!

[identity profile] super-pan.livejournal.com 2005-09-08 12:57 pm (UTC)(link)
I take that back. They also look pissed. At Malfoy.

[identity profile] bufo-viridis.livejournal.com 2005-09-08 11:03 pm (UTC)(link)
I can't draw for life, so I shouldn't open my mouth here, but I have one problem with the picture.
When it started loading I was cuious, where's that teacher herding these kids too - I thought it was a part of your earlier comics. Then I realized it's Hermione punching Malfoy and I was thinking again - but there was no teacher at the scene! Finally I realized (by the scar) that it's Harry.
So that's my problem: he looks for me as a stereotypical, thirty-sth. college teacher all girlies will fall in love with. Again, that's just my impression.

What is really cool about the picture is the POV -gives a totally new perspective.

[identity profile] gunderpants.livejournal.com 2005-09-09 01:35 am (UTC)(link)
Agree with the others: the POV is really original and allows for a decent view of the characters faces.

Secondly, I love your TEH RAIGING!!! female characters. You get angry women done really well.